Watch the first 1 minute 45 seconds again.
(Don't worry- you will get to watch the whole video next week
or even after this task if you can't wait!)
Next week we are going to write a narrative of the video.
Today we are going to have a go at using the slow write technique
for the first paragraph.
Remember to re read each sentece.
Does it have the correct criteria from the list above?
Is your paragraph 8 sentences long?
Does it flow and avoid repetition?
Read the two slow write examples in the document below.
Has example 1 or 2 completed the task better?
Lesson - summer week 3
Lesson 4 - Calculate perimeter